Monday, July 28, 2014

Loving Minor Characters More Than Main Characters

I loved Luna Lovegood and Fred Weasley more than Harry, Hermonie, and Ron.
Finnick more than Katniss and Peeta.
Candor better than Tris and the Dauntless.
These authors have something in common: they took the time to flesh out every character by making them think they’re the main character.
They Think They’re The Most Important
Just like in real life, each character thinks they are the most important. Outside of mothers and immediate family, who else spends most of their time worrying about someone else’s problems and not their own?
Side characters have their own life and back story which influences their decisions away from the main story. When you hang out with friends each person is the main character in their perspective. What you do are MC actions in your mind. But they are also side character actions to everyone else sitting and talking.
They Are Mysterious
Especially in first person narratives, readers don’t get a chance to be inside side characters’ heads. We can analyze their decisions and dialogue for clues, but we aren’t run through their thoughts and feelings like the main character.
This intrigues us because they remain mysterious.
They Are Amplified
Most classic protagonists are rather boring- they usually take the moral stance, represent what is good, and the side character is the reader’s voice, asking the questions the reader ponders while reading.
The side character act as the catalyst and questions strict moral decisions of the protagonist in a world that isn’t black or white (Gale from the Hunger Games).
While your protagonist should always be front and center in the conflict, your side characters will more often than not jump first to stir the pot.
Above are signs of a good author. When you can empathize with even the smallest character, the author has done her job in fleshing them out, giving them mystery, and making them amplify the conflict by testing the beliefs of the protagonist.

Monday, July 21, 2014

What My Critique Partner Taught Me

I made leaps and bounds a year and a half ago when I decided I’d allow someone to come into my life, read my blood on paper, and give them the option to stab it a million times over with red pen.
It’s terrifying. It’s brutal. But it’s completely necessary.
To make matters worse, I took the plunge on Reddit, a site known well for its uncouth comments. These traits are no different in writing subs, so I had my doubts about finding a CP who was a.) at my writing level, b.) honest but constructive, and c.) finished with a manuscript that made sense.
I am proud to say he met all three criteria. Actually, we joked that Reddit aligned the stars somehow for us. Here’s what we taught each other:
Writers Have Different Strengths
My writing is very condensed, but this makes my action scenes blurry. On the flip side, he’s overly descriptive to the point where he digs himself holes later on in the story. We ended up balancing each other out and calling bullshit on things that didn’t fit or make sense.
Different Perspectives
I honestly believe every writer should have one CP of the opposite gender. While I am an advocate for equality, men and women do communicate differently and it’s nice to have someone say, “Eh, not quite. Here’s how he/she would react.”
Similarly, it’s nice to work with someone who knows, and has worked with, what I call your specialty characters. In my WIP, one of my canon characters is an autistic boy. It just so happened my CP was a social worker who had experience with special needs students. That character is stronger because of it.
Ideas, Ideas, Ideas
Ideas are a dime a dozen, but it’s nice to hear how someone else would back themselves out of a corner, especially if they put you there. There were plenty of times where critiques messed up the entire flow of the story. Having someone there to offer escape routes felt like I wasn’t alone and I wasn’t stuck.

Sunday, July 13, 2014

"Figure 8" Cover Reveal

Hello lovelies, and thank you for visiting my author website. I am very excited to reveal the cover of my debut novel, FIGURE 8, set for release September 8th. 


FIGURE 8 is a New Adult dark thriller, featuring LGBTQ protagonists. With buzz this year around #WeNeedDiverseBooks and #DiversityIsNot, I'm excited to share a fresh perspective with readers looking for different voices.

Happy reading and writing!

-Lil

***A big shout out to Cheryl Ramirez at www.ccrbookcoverdesign.com for designing the cover.